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Illicit Kisses, Chapter 2 by ~Ifeelyourpain:iconIfeelyourpain:



Chapter 2
I heard the door click as it closed and my back was pushed firmly against the wall. You stood looming above me, fair skin, dark hair, piercing blue eyes.
   His breath flowed across my cheeks; it reminded me of flowers rustling in a gentle summer breeze, somehow.  My blood pulsed through my veins increasing my heart rate to a rapid fluttering, like a humming birds wings.
“Well, I’ll see you soon then” His voice was casual; the juxtaposition between his stance over me and relaxed voice was shocking.
“Yes, I suppose you will” I mirrored his voice with ease, one fortunate feature of my kind; we are blessed with unnatural self control. He stood staring at me for a moment then shifted his weight and turned walking straight out of the door without a backward glance.
    I spent the rest of the day in the park, crouching in one of the high branches of an ancient oak tree with Pride and Prejudice as my only companion; my thoughts drifted often, it was unlike me to get distracted so easily.  
     The worst part of being one of my kind, is the night, the long nights.  There is very little to do at night, most treat night as a wonder, a land of enigma or of fear, but in actual fact, it’s dull, dark is always the same there is no variation. So at night, I walked, trailing paths in parks and towns, along river beads and through fields; I never paid particular attention to where I was going. It was a cold night, as per usual in the English January.  
Once I returned to the sett I looked in one of the many mirrors, my skin was clearer that much was obvious, and I was starting to lose the stark line of my jaw and cheek bones, I hated that.  I settled into one of the arm chairs by the fire, no one else was around so I was free to sit and become totally wrapped in my own thoughts...
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Author's Comments

Hey, next chapter! It is unfinished! It needs loads of work, but it's a rough idea! Hope you like it! I just wanted to get it up there! Comments are most welcome!

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:iconroses-of-thorns:
its still wonderfully brilliant and compeling! but you switched from calling the guy you, to him... you might want to fix that... and maybe make it longer... like more detail about her nights, or what she is, or even her feelings... it might make it betetr... ^^

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"It's good for you soul...!"

"Oh Puh-lease. I have no soul." /Muahahahaha/
:iconheartbreaker77:
It's a short chapter and u prbly couldv'e added it on to the last one but your story is still good and i'm still impatiently waiting for the next installment.

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Life is life... hearts get broken along the way and it generally stinks... but atleast we get to live one
:iconifeelyourpain:
Yes I'm still working on it, thats the haf decent section of the chapter! but that bit still needs loads of work! It will ge longer, and the rest will be there soon! x

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I cannot sleep
I cannot cry
though I can feel
and I can die
Am I still human?
:iconifeelyourpain:
The you to him switch is there for a reason. XD It's because it's not finished that that doesn't make sence! lol but yes hopefully when the rest is up, it will become clear and this is only the first half of this chapter (the half decent part) lol but yes I will add the rest of the chapter on soon and thanks for taking the time to read and comment it!

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I cannot sleep
I cannot cry
though I can feel
and I can die
Am I still human?
:iconroses-of-thorns:
hahaha! no prob... I didn't know it was on purpose! that's rly cooL! can't wait!

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"It's good for you soul...!"

"Oh Puh-lease. I have no soul." /Muahahahaha/
:iconifeelyourpain:
lolz ^^

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I cannot sleep
I cannot cry
though I can feel
and I can die
Am I still human?
:iconroses-of-thorns:
^^

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"It's good for you soul...!"

"Oh Puh-lease. I have no soul." /Muahahahaha/

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